Malign Contingency

End of the last chapter! Now all that remains is the epilogue :O Hope it'll live up to people's expectations...






“What is it?” Nesthilius stared at the display. Their scanners hadn’t picked that up in the preliminary examination!

One of his generals waved a hand helplessly. “Some kind of Synth, we think-”

“Have the Zealot kill it! We can’t afford to stay in orbit any longer!”

This was true- the Arcadimaarians expressed little interest in their foes, but their oracular methods had divined an approaching threat- no doubt some of the monstrously huge, vacuum-dwelling Synth that had claimed so many spacecraft. They might have to leave at a moment’s notice.

The general watched events unfold, and he swallowed. “The Combine unit appears to be highly resilient, lord… perhaps if we dispatched the Domarian fir-”

“Shut up and do as I say!”

---​

Quarir was launched into the air- he eventually hit a building, sliding down to the ground in an ungraceful heap of pained limbs. The Zealot was saving him for later…

An amplifier gauntlet- the fingers fiery with psionic projections- slashed across Forty’s faceplate.

This had no effect- undaunted, the Zealot let loose a horrific combination of blows, striking his attacker repeatedly.

Apparently unharmed, Forty lazily drew his fist back and punched the Arcadimaarian so hard that he bounced off the ground.

Pyotr- contriving to act both hurriedly and stealthily- helped Nuri up. “It appears that the Fortieth shares the resistances of his Synth relatives. Make haste, Nuri Daekkler- regardless of the identity of this conflict’s victor, they will come after us.”

She could only nod. While Xenians and the servants of the Combine shrugged off telepathic intrusion, she couldn’t- her head throbbed, and she felt both physically and emotionally fatigued.

With surprising agility for one wearing so many robes and so much armour, the Zealot regained his footing. He drew a hand back a hurled an energy bolt at the Combine’s commando- Forty barely flinched.

Supporting the human, Pyotr led Nuri towards the rubble where Quarir lay. He did not respond to gentle prodding, so Nuri actively kicked the prone Domarian in her frustration.

With a grunt of exertion, the Arc smashed his lightning-white palm into the chitinous breastplate. It cracked, and a strangely mournful sound erupted from the demi-Synth.

“Hah!” The Arcadimaarian sneered, “Nothing can hope to face m-”

Forty hit him in the face. “Your desire to engage in conversation is not mutual.”

The Zealot’s lip was split, his nose pulped, his face cracked like china. Squinting in concentration, the assassin brought light creeping across his shattered visage- and when it faded, he was whole again.

“Uh, this might not be as one-sided as we thought,” Nuri swallowed. She slapped Quarir’s cheek repeatedly, urgently trying to revive him.

The Zealot had poise and finesse- while Forty was distinctly mechanical, his joints clicking and scraping as he parried and riposted. But the impression was that the Arcadimaarian was inefficient- despite moving slower, the Benefited human managed to block every blow and still find time to respond.

Forty managed to catch the Arc’s fist- twisting it cruelly, the Elite hurled the Zealot over his shoulder. Before they’d even hit the ground, Forty’s hand had removed his pulse cannon from his back and was blazing at the plummeting enemy with both barrels. The vast ammunition chains trailing from the weapon clicked through at speed- a solid wall of ballistic obliteration screamed away from Forty.

The Zealot managed to land on his feet- hands raised protectively, the Arc prepared to deflect the volley.

“If Quarir Nalore does not awaken,” Pyotr said, “we will have to carry him.”

Something exploded with a harsh snap- the Vortigaunt looked at the battle, and saw that the Elite’s pulse weapon had been broken in half. The Zealot’s psychic projectiles had finally found their mark.

Expending so much latent psionic energy that even Pyotr felt its effects, the Zealot formed both hands into a cup and smote Forty with a blinding, thunderous discharge.

Forty staggered- his shoulder was smoking, and a tiny crack had appeared in his lone viewing lens.

“And so it ends!”

The Zealot leapt, gauntlets alight.

“I AM PERFECTI-!”

But Forty caught him, cutting him short, picking him out of the air.

Eye aglow, the Elite placed both his hands on the side of his adversary’s head- and squeezed, holding him at arm’s length.

The Zealot shrieked in agony- there were cracking noises, and the cries rose to a womanish pitch.

Nuri felt her insides lurch. Blood was already flowing from between Forty’s fingers.

With a twisted, inhuman cry of triumph, Forty killed his adversary- the Zealot’s head finally caved in with a wet, blubbery pop.

Fumes rising from his torso section, Forty’s shoulders heaved in harmony with an inner rhythm that had little to do with his breathing. Hands awash in gore, the Elite turned.

“You,” Forty breathed. “You are all that remain!”

He took a step forward-

-and vanished, swallowed by a beam of light that seemed to leap from the ground and into the sky.

Quarir blinked groggily. “Tha’ was matter tran’ferer,” he slurred sleepily.

Nuri relaxed on seeing he was awake. “You mean… you mean like a teleporter?”

“Indeed,” Pyotr looked to the heavens. “However, it appears that Arcadimaarian acquisition devices lack the accuracy of Combine teleporters.”

Charlie- mind burning with questions and psychic collateral- screamed at them from the pile of debris he had been thrown atop of. They couldn’t hear him- there was too much noise.

A Strider- its arrival long overdue- smashed a wall aside, and its distortion cannon consumed the three survivors in reality-warping oblivion.

---​

Project Forty…

Forty’s head snapped upward, his lone eye glowing a deep red.

“Sir?”

You are to be decommissioned.

“But why? I am the greatest combatant humanity could ever produce!”

That much is true- but you are volatile, the Advisor continued. Uncontrollable. Dismissive of instruction.

“I have achieved so much!” Forty was furious at his masters, even as he worshipped everything they stood for. “And I can do so much more! I shall tear this ship apart from the inside! Kill everything within!”

You intend to demolish this craft alone? Eliminate all two-thousand personnel onboard? Despite lacking your pulse cannon?

“You know I can do it!”

Yes- we believe you have a great enough capacity for violence. Very well- we accept your proposal.

“Anything for the greater glory of the Universal Union.” Forty bowed.

We will take the death of the ACS Glorious as proof of your willingness to serve. Go forth for the betterment of us all.

---​

“Why would they ask us to escort the Zealot?”

“Perhaps,” the guard joked- as was his right, as a higher-privileged assignee- “command expects him to express displeasure at failing his mission.”

There were laughs- and they might even have been tinged with humour, but they were to please the senior officer that made the remark, as was expected of them.

The phase bay doors opened. They were impenetrable- two-inch platanicrete with a magnetic seal that could resist a megaton of pressure- but they’d opened.

Forty stood in the doorway. He stomped forwards, and his hands grasped the necks of the closest soldiers- he twisted them simultaneously, hurling their broken corpses aside in a perfectly symmetrical double murder.

The officer knew, as the fusion pulses of his men’s rifles pattered harmlessly off the monstrosity’s armoured hide, that he was already dead.

Forty ran towards them, revelling in doing what he was made to do.

---​

“We can’t stop it!”

The tactics analyser- for the first time in its long service- was displaying the interior of the ship.

“It plows through everything in its path…” the general stared, disbelievingly, at the delicate crystal display. Every squadron, every unit, fell before the Combine killing machine they’d mistakenly beamed aboard.

“Send the Guardians,” Nesthilius ordered, but his general’s cowardice was contagious. “They are machines- they will resist it, it is unarmed-”

“We did! It punched through their torsos and crushed their hearts! Nothing damages it! It cannot be stopped!”

Nesthilius looked to the command balcony- the usually sedate tier was a hive of panicking machinists. “Open the airlocks,” he bellowed, “disconnect portions of the ship- I don’t care about losses, just keep it away from here!”

“The controls aren’t responding, lord! Everything’s dead!”

“And soon, you will be.”

The grand oracular- the vast screen that could cover the observation window on command- flared into life. On it, the distinctive avatar of the Traitor Mainframe glowed, looking down on them all, its eye at the centre of a swirling vortex of angular shapes.

“I have crippled your systems,” Maintonon informed them. “The Guardians will ignore further commands, the defence fields will remain inactive and your engines will not start.”

“How can you…?”

“You made the mistake of angering three factions- and I do not count Earth among them. The Combine detected your transmission- but its obsession with your presence- and that of another entity- allowed my signal to utilise their own transmitters without impediment. I drowned your scanners with ghosts- there is no impending Combine threat, but your haste to retreat brought one aboard. And now you will die at the hands of their finest invention.”

Nesthilius stared. People screamed, controls flashed golden- the Sunspear was in chaos. On the tactics analyzer, the Combine commando’s blip moved at a constant speed, pausing only to obliterate those that came too close.

“The Combine sees you as a great threat. You followed my signal in your arrogance, in your blind desire to impede me- and it is has been your undoing. I and my ally have had to do surprisingly little. You, gentlemen, were my malign contingency.”

Maintonon terminated the connection.

Behind Nesthilius’s fear-stricken form, the main blast door began to buckle under a sustained assault.

In front of it, a man adjusted his tie, smiled, and walked into nothingness.
 
:o :( ;(

I can't believe it's actually coming to an end! Thank goodness for epilogues.

I've enjoyed this story so much, especially how it evolved over time. I'm really going to miss Quarir, Nuri, Pyotr and all of the other great characters. I need to make sure I keep up with your original fic. I'm hoping to see you on the shelves one of these days! :D
 
/me kneels and prays.

Dear Lord, the awshens of this fan-fic are not able to be measured in a word or even a sentence. May its memory live on in us all.

**Good job mate, i love the ending Maintonon is always a smart fellow, destroy a whole Arcadimaarian Battlecrusier without even having his own troops stepping on board.
Make sure to PM me when a ML update is up!**
 
Nice. I really like the way that ending so completely emphasises what the story seems to be party about - that these characters (and by extension everyone in the world, you could say :p) are just pawns in a greater game. No matter how cool, powerful, great, nice, loveable characters they are, in the end they're just trying to survive while bigger powers move them about like chess pieces. So I think it's genius to have the final battle focus on these two incredibly warriors, two enormous powers duelling while the pawns try to stay out of the way, and then get blasted to smithereens in a split-second, in a totally insignifigant way. :D

But it's so depressing. ;(
 
btw Edcrab, if you just so happen to start writing another fantasmically awshens fanfic please do tell us.
 
Well... it would have been more dramatic, I'd admit, but there's no way I'm killing off a character like Quarir just yet! ;)





Epilogue: Redemption

Quarir Nalore was back in his apartment.

His first thought was- I’m dead. But his second was- but I always hated that wallpaper, so this can’t be heaven. But my sauna is still there, so it can’t be hell.

It was a simulation.

“Correct, Nalore.”

Quarir nodded. He’d expected as much. “Rescued me at the last second, did you?”

“I suppose I did.”

“And the others? What about them?”

“They will be fine, Nalore.”

“I don’t believe you! You’ve screwed with me for the last time! You don’t tell me anything!”

“Then listen, Nalore- I shall explain. Do not fear for the future- everything has gone to plan.”

“Like hell it has!”

“This was all arranged, Nalore. You all behaved as I predicted.”

“Suuuure we did-”

“I even knew you would say that, Nalore. People assume that humans- or any living being- are inherently unpredictable. But if you have full knowledge of their personalities- and total control of outside stimuli- then their actions become exquisitely easy to forecast.”

Quarir didn’t say anything else- just in case the Supercomputer was prepared to say he’d predicted that, too.

“This operation was a complete success. Congratulations are in order.”

He’d had enough. “I don’t know what the operation was, you bastard! You kept us in the dark all along!”

“Purely for reasons of security. Had you known what my intentions were, the Combine could have forced the information from you- and they have methods that make mere torture seem ethical. If they realised your purpose on Earth, it would have undone everything you set out to achieve.”

“Even though I don’t know what I’ve achieved!”

“Your nanotech failed not because of overuse- but because I disabled it, Nalore.”

“What? Why?”

“When Worborne uploaded your details to the Overwatch archive, he included an entry that described your augmentations. Thus the Combine currently believe our technological standard to be very low- far less advanced than they had previously estimated- merely because they examined a Domarian with deactivated bionics. I reactivated them soon after, of course- otherwise you would have been far too fragile. Their return had little to do with Zichekoam’s bullet-removing surgeries.”

“Hmm…”

“In addition, the Elites confiscated the samples Worborne took from your body- and the Combine have undoubtedly examined them extensively.”

“And?” said Quarir, who had learnt to expect the unexpected.

“They will consider you to be a normal human, Nalore.”

“But I’m a serumite-”

“Not any more, Nalore. Before I instructed your nanodrones to dismantle your bionics, I arranged for them to begin undoing that which your serum jab had achieved. Not enough to make you a ‘basic’ human- you are still subtly different to one of Earth’s natives- but enough to make the Combine believe that, ultimately, a Domarian is nothing more than human. So similar as to be identical in any practical sense.”

“Why’d you do that?”

“Because now they no longer foresee any great benefit in invading Legion space. It would be a great battle- a battle I would lose, certainly, but I would take millions of them with me- for little gain. They have humans right here on Earth- and they do not consider it viable to risk so much to integrate a species that they see as identical to this world’s- excepting a few Uclasion artefacts, such as, of course, myself.”

“But what about Zyke and Yuza?”

“They were backups that were not deployed- but they certainly aided you very well. Zichekoam in particular was an important plant- as a Rot, the Combine would have realised his kind was impossible to integrate into their society: Rots have near-total control of their biology and even their molecular structure- far too hard to convert into a useful unit.”

“Not deployed? Zyke died for you, you-”

“Zyke died for himself. He had come to terms with the destructive nature of his condition- he has redeemed his past crimes with his heroic sacrifice. He is at peace.”

“His condition? I knew he was a Rot-”

“And a powerful one. But in, shall we say, his past life, he abused his genetic nature. He set his own destruction in motion with his pursuit of physical perfection- causing his own body to decay rapidly, at least by normal Rot standards- and thus he had nothing to lose. He wanted to make amends.”

“He never told me-”

“He has a right to some privacy, as we all do. Zyke and Yuza were not given your task, as you performed admirably- but Zyke was a perfect supporter, and Yuza was successful in her mission. She has been removed from Earth through separate means.”

Quarir let that issue drop- he’d wondered why Zyke had shared his position on Earth- but he thought this all sounded a little too pat. “But they’ll still see us a threat, surely? We’ve got a lot of planets to our name…”

“The Combine see you as a mediocre primate raised to greater heights by a hostile entity- the same entity that propelled Gordon Freeman to a level of competence that made him humanity’s messiah and a true nemesis of the Union.”

“Yeah, right,” said Quarir, who didn’t like the idea of slugs considering him primitive, “but we’ve still got this empire of ours-”

“We are positively minute compared to the Combine. True, they may someday consider us a viable target- despite the potential for catastrophic casualties- but they now have a far more interesting goal.”

“What?”

“You yourself came surprisingly close to identifying my plan, Nalore. Directly after your briefing, if you recall, you voiced the opinion that I must be planning to play the Arcadimaarians against the Combine.”

Quarir nodded. “I remember, yeah…”

“But, at the time, you underestimated the Combine. They are more powerful than the Arcadimaarians- more powerful than all our other enemies combined, Nalore. They have quite an appropriate name.”

“What’s that got to do with getting them at each other’s throats?”

“There would be little contest, Nalore. The Combine would win, given enough time. I do not want them at war- I want them fighting for their very survival. One too busy with defence, the other with aggression.”

“Why would they do that?”

“Because of the Arcadimaarian presence. Their idiocy has proven our salvation- the Arcadimaarinans sent a Zealot to apprehend you instead of a mere operative, and oversaw his operation with a Sunspear warship- indulging in blatant reconnaissance and resupplying him when necessary. While the Combine sees you as fortuitous primitive, they see the Arcadimaarians as an advanced super-race that is as dangerous as Freeman himself. And, like Freeman, they see them as a great prize.”

Quarir realised what Maintonon had done.

“A species combining telepathy with advanced technology- a race with desirable genetics and machinery. A species they will now target religiously, with every success.” Maintonon laughed- a noise Quarir had never heard before, and had no desire to hear again. “I have undone all my debts, Nalore- I aided a certain suited gentleman- you may have met him- by using you and Zichekoam’s rebels to spread the Combine thin enough to guarantee Freeman’s success. In return this entity merely lingered nearby, ensuring the Combine assumed you were his pawn, rather than a representative of your entire species. The Arcadimaarians, however, are now the Combine’s prime target. They will indeed fight- but both will forget us, for the time being- and, for the moment, Ucelsia and Earth will be that much safer.”

“Good grief,” said Quarir. “That’s really, well… clever…”

“Yes, Nalore- it is in my very nature to be malleable. Everything I plan has a backup- my every activity has a scheme in reserve. Even your own actions- actions you considered to be against my orders- were planned for.”

Maintonon’s avatar grew as big as a world.

“I am contingency.”

---​


Voices. Charlie could hear voices.

Their voices? Perhaps, like him, they’d survived!

“Negative Q7, the area is clear.”

No. The voice was flat, distorted by static. The Elites had caught up with him.

Charlie stood up, every bone aching, every inch of his skin scraped. He looked down from his throne of smoking debris- three Elites, standing in the crater. They were no doubt investigating reports of disturbances- energy signatures that, for once, weren’t down to Combine weaponry. Walking amongst the ash of his friends- if distortion cannons even left that.

They hadn’t seen him- but Charlie saw something else. The Elites were probably searching for it themselves: but he had the advantage of knowing what it was, and where it had been.

The Mercenary rifle. The plasma weapon- dulled by dust- was half buried in rubble, barely two metres from him. It had outlived two masters; the bounty hunter that had dogged Yuza during two missions; and Quarir Nalore, the Domarian that had served his sentence on Earth.

What did he have to lose?

“Repeat Q7, the Nexus compound is clear on this side- aargh!

Despite Quarir’s past claims, the rifle worked as he expected it to. Its recoil was quite weak- but its glowing plasma bolts punched through the helmet effortlessly. He didn’t hesitate in eliminating the Elite’s colleagues- he had the advantage of surprise, and they did not have time to bring their pulse rifles to bear. Charlie realised just how well technology could compensate for a lack of skill.

He skidded down the gravely mounds that filled the street. The Elites’ white uniforms were dotted with charred black perforations- and they had nothing of use. Pulse rifles? Well, he had a gun with limitless ammunition: it could recharge in what, ten seconds? Once he’d have hoarded them, but now, what was the point?

“…kk-kk…kk… Come in! Anyone?”

Charlie started. One of the Elites’ radios- a wiry mess that was spilling from a split helmet- was purveying a man’s worried tones. But the Resistance had been jacking Combine frequencies for years, he thought, hadn’t they- we?

Another static-filled interjection. “Anyone? Everyone report in! We’re…-” More static- “…now!”

Gingerly, Charlie reached for the device, trying to ignore the fact it was slick with blood. “Hello?” he said, trying not to hold it too close to his face.

“Hey!” There was static. “We need to know what’s happening!”

The signal appeared clearer- apparently, the way Charlie was squeezing the components was helping matters, forcing contacts into the right places. “What’s happening?” Charlie blinked.

Like Charlie Harris, the rebel on the other end of the radio was not a professional, military comm officer. He swore repeatedly, most of it drowned by convenient interference. “-ck it! We’re asking you, man! We’re the Prospectors!”

The Nova Prospekt survivors were coming back and wanted news. Reinforcements wanting a report. Charlie thought of Dmitri, of Carns’s squad, of Quarir and Nuri and Pyotr…

“Well? C’mon, you know anything?”

And then he thought of apathy. Of dissent. Of how the sub-species divide in Domarian culture manifested itself in hostility that had nearly claimed Zyke and Yuza, threatening their mission. And then he thought of Earth, and humanity’s fate. Of morale and hope. He thought of unity.

“It’s going great,” he whispered.

“What?”

“We’re winning!” he said more firmly. “We ambushed an Elite squadron- got all of them! Couple of them looked special, too! We took down Mortar Synth and drove a Strider off! We outran Gunships- it’s going great! Get everyone moving! We can rally!”

Behind him, the monolithic Combine wall shuddered. But it didn’t advance on him, claiming further space- it opened. The outer compound was open- Yuza had done it…

“We’ve got the perimeter open- now it’s just the Nexus wall blocking us!”

“Well,” the radio garbled, “that’s just what we need-”

Charlie remembered Pyotr’s promise. “And Freeman’s back! We heard from him!” That was a lie- but he’d already told several. But maybe Freeman was back by now. “Get people moving- everyone listening, take up arms! Help Calhoun, get Dr. Vance back- we’ll win!”

The world turned, and awaited the aftermath of an inevitable struggle. But, just for once, it might prove strengthening.

Behind him, on the roof of a crumbling apartment block, a man walked away and disappeared.
 
Last part of the epilogue....




“Take me home,” Quarir said flatly.

“Was that a demand, Nalore?”

“It damn well was!” Quarir snarled, “I’ve repaid my debt to society! I’ve been your puppet! Now take me home!”

“You are redeemed in the Legion’s eyes, Quarir Nalore. That much is true. Your debt is undone.”

“Then I don’t need to be your slave!”

“There are other dangers, Nalore. Other obstacles to overcome. You are still needed- I have one more task to ask of you.”

“Do it yourself! I don’t care anymore!”

“That,” Maintonon interrupted loudly, “is an untruth. You do care, Quarir. You do not have to do this- but the question, Nalore, is whether you want to.”

“I…” Quarir trailed to a halt. It was stupid, heroic, poetic, all the clichés he despised: but he did care, now. He doubted himself. He doubted his past- he doubted everything. He’d seen what the Combine could do. He’d seen what people could do to themselves, without alien civilisations battling on their home turf.

“Then it’s settled. Again, Nalore, good luck- and well done.”

---​

That sensation again. He despised it- and yet like so many things he hated, he was learning to understand it and tolerate it. He knew how phase shifting worked, so it was no wonder it made him feel odd.

He knew that Maintonon had the Domarian’s best interests at heart, and so he was learning to accept-

No! he berated himself, don’t think like that! You’re just another pawn! It doesn’t care!

His surroundings had undergone a huge change. There was snow, for one thing- the ground was covered in its soft blanket, and flakes fell in a gentle, but constant, torrent.

Gentle hills contrasted oddly with jagged cliffs- but it could have been any planet. There were plenty of Domarian ice worlds, but the majority had the irritating habit of having multiple climates. This might be the polar cap of a tropical planet, for example.

He didn’t feel cold, and he realised why. He was wearing his pale suit and tie, the set he’d been wearing when Maintonon had first abducted him. It was a thermal set- very expensive- but he already missed his citizenry fatigues. He’d lived in them so long that he even missed their smell of blood and sweat and strife.

So- here he was. Alone again. No hints. Nothing. All because that cybernetic bastard thought running blind was their best bet.

He had his gun back, but didn’t care. It was a high-calibre photonic, but he’d miss the dirty bark of Earth combustibles, or the harsh clack of a Combine pulse rifle. But he wouldn’t miss the death.

“You bastard,” he sobbed. He didn’t know whether he was talking to Maintonon or himself.

Something beeped- he rolled up his sleeve and there, where he’d once kept it, was his wrist computer.

“A lot of good it does me now!” he screamed. The compact comm device beeped again. It’d be Maintonon. There’d be some stupid reason why he was using it instead of transmitting straight to his brain.

He accepted the call. No ID number, and an encrypted signal. Not surprising- few networks would recognise the computer’s frequency. He had half a mind to cut it off right now-

“Quarir?”

He stared.

“I don’t know if this is working…”

“Nuri?!”

“Yes!” She breathed in relief. “It’s us! Pyotr and I heard you calling- are you okay? We’re behind this little hill with a grey rock on it-”

“I’m fine!” He felt himself laughing. “Just stay right there!”

Snow swirled around sedately, and he approached the shivering duo at the nearest hill.

He wouldn’t have been anywhere else for anything.

---​

This was a place on no map- if you discounted Combine surveys, of course. It was a phase station of no fixed address, one of the Combine’s finest inventions.

A Commander lived here: Advisors reported to him. He commanded enough to make an Arcadimaarian jealous, shock a Domarian, and blow the mind of an Earth native.

And yet he was just one among hundreds: but he- if such a descriptor could be applied- was in charge of one particular quadrant. The potential loss of a one-planet civilisation was of little interest to him, as the beloved Universal Union had a foothold in countless dimensions. Nevertheless, it was disquieting, and he had work to do.

He accessed the Overwatch archives by instructing it with his mind. He went straight into the threat monitoring system, selecting Individuals as opposed to Societies.

He added three points to the threat rating of the nameless entity that had undoubtedly steered Freeman. It was now as far into the red as it could go- a privilege usually reserved for star-eating transdimensional phenomena.

Freeman, too, another sprinkling of points, and his personal indicator went a darker red.

Project Forty got four more points: he was an ally, but he was still present in the listings. Besides, alliances shifted at all times.

Maintonon- and thus the Legion he represented- was passed over. But after some thought, the Commander went back, and added one lone point to the Mainframe’s profile, including a link that alluded to the possibility of collusion between it and another particular entity.

The Commander went into the Society archive, heading straight for the Arcadimaarian reference. They got six points, and a note mentioning their worth. Their profile would automatically be forwarded to the Benefactory for consideration- they could well be the next target for a multi-Citadel attack.

The Zealot entry, however, lost several points.

The Commander sat- there was little else he could do- and thought deeply.

He went back into the Individual category, and created a new reference:

Quarir Nalore: Domarian Agent. Threat level: 7. Advice: …

The Commander thought again.

…observe. Application pending.

And, if only for a while, the universe was that much safer.
 
A triple post- oh, woe is me. But it's all over now- I'd like to say thanks to everyone for their constant input, especially TinyXipe, evilsloth and Sulkdodds, who took reviews to a whole new level with their support and feedback!

And on that note- read Desperate Measures, KRA and The Hunters... or else!

Thanks again all! :D
 
Christ. Incredible. Cheers, buddy, that was immense.
 
:eek:

Part of me is slightly sorry about the loss of Banksian-style 'main character dies to emphasis how insignifigant in the great scheme of things he really is and just to make you even more angry at the cold disgregard of said higher powers'.

But most of me is happy for a happy ending. :D Even with that, there's still that main shared theme from HL2.


EDIT: Thanky kindly. :D
 
Almost brings a tear to my eye.

Just a note on the ending, where the beffing hell are / is the three at the end, in the snow...
Would you please link me to 'Charlie's Angle'? (if that's the right one?)
It is a worthy end.

Forture and Glory, Strength and Honour!
Thanks for the pimpage
 
Absolutly superb. that truly was a worthy end to a great pice of fiction. We await your next piece with bated breath (and if you dont do one? Well, I can always read this again :D)
 
Ahhhh....

Such a satisfying ending. I think Sulkdodds summed it up very well with his post:
Nice. I really like the way that ending so completely emphasises what the story seems to be party about - that these characters (and by extension everyone in the world, you could say ) are just pawns in a greater game. No matter how cool, powerful, great, nice, loveable characters they are, in the end they're just trying to survive while bigger powers move them about like chess pieces. So I think it's genius to have the final battle focus on these two incredibly warriors, two enormous powers duelling while the pawns try to stay out of the way, and then get blasted to smithereens in a split-second, in a totally insignifigant way.
Everything tied up so well, from Maintonons plans to Quarirs development from a self-serving jerk into someone who has concern for others beside himself. I liked Charlies bit at the end there too. Even thought we all know what happens, it added that feeling of hopeful excitement.

I don't think Quarir, Nuri and Pyotrs location ultimately is really important (unless we're being set up for a sequel :O), it's more just the fact that Quarir has finally realized what his priorities are, irregardless of the setting (absolutely loved that section, by the way).

I don't know if anyone from Valve ever pokes around in the fanfiction forums, but I've always thought it would be great for them to read your story. I think they would appreciate the complexity and deviousness of Maintonons plans. :upstare:

Congratulations Edcrab! Well done! Hehe, and thanks for the mention.
 
Now that you are done Edcrab, you must know what everything looks like in your story, right? The characters, the races, the weapons, the settings.......DRAW THEM.
 
It'd be awesome to have you draw something Sulk :D

Just to address the Banks issue- I did toy with the idea of an abrupt killing-off of the characters, but while an author like him might manage that, I think it'd just be a waste considering everything I'd set them up for... might have been very dramatic, but it implies a kind of nihilistic undertone which doesn't suit the protagonists. :o Wordy!

Oh, and as for pics, this is a Forty sketch I drew a while back. Note the Zealot getting his arse kicked on the right ;)
 

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i think that ending COULD make a pretty good sequal, even more original then your last one (with them being on a different planet and all)

back to the point, I havnt actually read a story that was so well written in a VERY long time, you really need some sort of award for that. really, really. In fact that might even be better then some of pratchets books.

Thats all from me, Very well done

-D
 
Yeah, I always wondered about that fanfic link :O

Boogymanx: I always assumed the Vortigaunts themselves could only teleport with aid from Nihilanth/the Alien Controllers, and they never seem to do it during HL2, so they might have lost the ability... but what do you mean?
 
If we talk to Dan_T and Chris_D (it rhymes!) nicely something will get done
Having DM and ML to populate the page would be good fun.

Also chop in some of the best DC articles.
 
And here we have it, the COMPLETE word file of Malign Contingence, took 1 hour to compile, totally unedited stats:

33 Chapters
249 Pages
89,055 Words
441,749 Characters
206 Paragraphs

Enjoy

Malign Contingency

PS. Any chance of you making a thread for your new fanfic in this forum Edcrab?
 
Darkwolf, you rock :D Saved me a lot of effort there... thanks!

And what do you mean by my new fanfic? :O If you mean UC:ML, that's not really a fanfic so I can't post it here... but if you mean any future productions, I'll sure as hell let you guys see it first :)
 
no problem, i was doing it to print it anyway, but i might add that it is totally unedited and was just cut and pasted from the site :)
 
Hmm, stopping from writing my own fan fiction and reading another makes me realize how great some of the fan fiction coming out of our community is. I only read your first chapter, but I am really liking the initial story. To set it completley apart from Earth in the beginning is really a very good idea. I'll have to read further into this.
 
Hey, thanks theotherguy :D I've always been a fan of The Resistance, although I admit that it was such an awesome epic that I always felt like I was toiling in it's shadow :o

To be honest, I always thought the "wtf-he's-not-from-Earth" angle was a bit cheap on my behalf- but it works out okay. Gave me an excuse to have such a clueless protagonist, at least!
 
Edcrab, is that a Warhammer 40k Dreadnought as your avater? Or, rather, a Paint version of a Dreadnought? Its always somewhat bothered me what it was.
 
My avatar is Lennie the Security Mech :O Character from my original fiction: and the same kind of critter that Quarir had so much trouble with before Maintonon threw him on Earth with the G-man.

He is pretty dreadnoughty ;)
 

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After i read about Lennie, it thought that look like a SERV unit.
sweet!
 
I chat to him now and again - soulslicer you must read the rest of the stuff in his sig, so much better than MC.
 
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