indeed.. it is not that great.. it needs alot of work. its ashame that it is soo blurry. I dont know if you meant it to be blurry or is it because you saved it as such a low jpeg compression.
anyway. I think you use tutorials to much.. like the one from phong etc. you really need to experiment on your own. because now you are just in a repeating pregress.. you keep making the same stuf time after time