Tomblur and Mash

[Aelphais]

This is my first comic as well as the first posing shots (at least that I've posted) I mostly want to know how I did by my posing, but I may continue the story (or lack there of) depending on what you guys say about it.

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Aelphais

 

[Aelphais]

Here is part two, as urged on by a few friends who I showed.

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Aelphais

 

[Aelphais]

After re-reading it a few times, there needs to be something else there. Tomblur (The girl, darker text) and Mash (the guy, lighter text) were sent in by the resistance to find a new base after their old one was bombed.
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Aelphais