Update on "The Two Brothers"!!!!!!!!

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heres the moment you have all been waiting for...........

Chapter 1

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more to come........................ :bounce:
 
damn those links dont work..............
ill fix them later...........
 
lol

theyre good, well the first one is. gtg to bed now bye

EDIT: Note: i meant the first 1 is the only 1 i read b4 i had to go
 
omg so cool. l33t 4axor and other crazy phrase things.
btw, what the hell is that gun that the sleeping person has????? it isnt a normal cs 1.

keep up the good work
 
gr8 job man. i look foreward to the next ones. keep it coming.
oh, dark wolf i believe the weapon you can't identify is an FN F2000.
http://world.guns***/assault/as41-e.htm
look at this site for a real life pic of one if you want
 
thanks
i thought the links didnt work????????
oh well i guess they do..........
 
well they dont but i just put each separate one into the bar at the top :P

here are the links:
1. http://img287.echo.cx/my.php?image=csoffice00265sc.jpg
2. http://img287.echo.cx/my.php?image=csoffice00274rv.jpg
3. http://img269.echo.cx/my.php?image=deprodigy00047fj.jpg
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keep it up
 
thanks for fixing the links man.............
im in school right now so i really can post anymore.............. :hmph:
 
next chapter when I get home from Church......
should only be an hour
this chapter is much longer than the other............
 
heres chapter 2

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could you make a website or post a zip file?
The first chapter dosn't work for me, damm image shack!
 
yeah sure.............
ill get it up when i get home from school...........
 
Halflifeguy try to avoid posting several times in a row, use the edit button and instead of telling people when it's coming, just keep silent and surprise people when you post it. :)
 
yeah i know..........
i just did it cus i was excited about this chapter.......
what do you guys think of it?
the next one will be action packed..................
 
New chapter!!!!!!

Enjoy!!!!

unless people are really intereested in this stroy i will stop making more chapters.........this a lot of hard work amd when nobody even looks lat them it hurts....

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I can't say I find it all that interesting(sorry mate).. I never read any of the other stuff. I did like "http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/6994/deinferno00099wi.jpg" though.. lol the way the guy has his chest puffed out and leaning forward, he just looks retarded. :laugh: Well don't mind that I didn't find it all that fun, I'm sure others will... hell, I'm just glad you are doing something creative with it instead of making lame/fake/clothed porn with alyx. :cheers:

I will give the next chapter a look though.. so don't stop making them!
 
no its fine........
i love feedback
i just hate it when nobody looks at it
 
i'm sorry mate, but i can't look at them, my Internet page shuts itself down when i use, image shack, or photo bucket, i don't know why.

email me a zip of them, would you please

[email protected]

look forward to reading them.
 
is anybody really interested in this story?
im planning on making another one after this one is over........
got anything you would like to see?
 
It's pretty good although the amasing man who can fire an AWM with one hand and the boss guy with the 3rd thumb sticking out of the back of his hand were quite odd. mind you, i shouldnt critise cos i cant use gary's mod atall well. keep it up, just make shure they dont run into a man with a pet cat, definitly not a white fluffy one, and a man who says "Good evening Mr. ..., we have been expecting you.". In case you havent noticed i think this is getting a tad James Bond like...
 
You got it guys.......
last chapter coming up soon
ill give you more info on my next story after this one is finished.
 
Chuckle...
most amusing.
a new series of office cronicles would be nice, but like so many other things I have mentioned on these forums they will never happen.....
 
Spalding!
Spalding!
LOL
Awsome, i'll talk to you on AIM about a story idea right?
 
omg, now you mention it... why dont we get someone to make a wilson vollyball skin
 
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