hey guys whats up

[codyT]

just found this site. well anyway i'm trying to make a halflife2 song. tell me what you think so far

http://wackygamers.com/mymusic/remix_sample.mp3

oh yeah clans if you want to add it to your clan site fill free to.

i'm sure you won't like it enough to put it on your guys site.

 

[Ranga]

um... not to be depressing, or anything, the quality is good, but the music is very repetative....

 

[beam]

Welcome, I'm kinda new here too. I showed up when I got HL2 to ask a question I think. Found this place much more friendly then the steam forums, theres a few bad apples but just about everybody seems pretty cool and very helpful. Now that I'm here I'll probably stick around as long as there is HL2 and CS to talk about :upstare:

 

[codyT]

I might add that I've only had fruityloops for 10 hrs.

 

[Darkknighttt]

ya it is a bit repetitive.

 

[hungryduck]

Well, I'd hate to say it, but: your music sucks. no chord changes, no discernable melody, nothing. All you did is paint a crappy loop over and over in some crappy program to make crap, with dialogue pasted over it thats not yours. Let me tell you something, looped music is usually almost always crap, theres just no avoiding it, Unless it is created with artistic sense and some degree of structure/musicality/progression/rhythm. Fruityloops does not necessarily make music. Unless used well, it makes crap. They make fruityloops for talentless hacks who wanna become the next idiot Eminem or rapper DJ crap or whatever the hell they call those people. And dont go try and learn guitar and learn "Willly Willy" and walk around town like your cool cause you smoke and have a guitar, like every other teenie bopper out there. (Not saying you will, just presenting the common modern stereotype seen roaming the nations highschools today). I'm terrible sorry if this sounds harsh.
God I love to vent after work.

Otherwise, Welcome! Have fun in the forums!
Oh, and HL2 is good.

 

[MarcoPollo]

Welcome to the forums but beware of making stupid threads or i will flame you....it's what I do.

 

[Lifehost]

hmmm...

Make it a bit longer with some more variety and it could be a LOT better.

BTW welcome to the forums!

 

[Ranga]

Well, I'd hate to say it, but: your music sucks. no chord changes, no discernable melody, nothing. All you did is paint a crappy loop over and over in some crappy program to make crap, with dialogue pasted over it thats not yours. Let me tell you something, looped music is usually almost always crap, theres just no avoiding it, Unless it is created with artistic sense and some degree of structure/musicality/progression/rhythm. Fruityloops does not necessarily make music. Unless used well, it makes shit. They make fruityloops for talentless hacks who wanna become the next goddamn Eminem or rapper DJ crap or whatever the hell they call those people. And dont go try and learn guitar and learn goddamn "Willly Willy" and walk around town like your cool cause you smoke weed and have a guitar, like every other teenie bopper asshole out there. (Not saying you will, just presenting the common modern stereotype seen roaming the nations highschools today). I'm terrible sorry if this sounds harsh.
God I love to vent after work.

holy wack! now that was a bit... well.... it could have been said differently...

i don't think it was that bad... just very simple and repetative

 

[hungryduck]

I apologize If I came across a bit uppity....had to deal with too many idiots today at work...needed to vent.

 

[codyT]

well maybe i didn't provide another information. I've only been messing with this program for about 5 hours. That was all I could come up with. I haven't learned yet to add melody and rythem to it. But anyway I wasn't done with this thats why in the url its called remix_sample.

Anyway thxs for the feedback abit harsh for a newb to take but feedback is feedback and I prepared to take it all.

btw i only attempted to create the song cause i thought it would be a great way to get away from video games and get creative for once in my life. :bounce:

 

[:Rex Saw:]

Well, I'd hate to say it, but: your music sucks. no chord changes, no discernable melody, nothing. All you did is paint a crappy loop over and over in some crappy program to make crap, with dialogue pasted over it thats not yours. Let me tell you something, looped music is usually almost always crap, theres just no avoiding it, Unless it is created with artistic sense and some degree of structure/musicality/progression/rhythm. Fruityloops does not necessarily make music. Unless used well, it makes shit. They make fruityloops for talentless hacks who wanna become the next goddamn Eminem or rapper DJ crap or whatever the hell they call those people. And dont go try and learn guitar and learn goddamn "Willly Willy" and walk around town like your cool cause you smoke weed and have a guitar, like every other teenie bopper asshole out there. (Not saying you will, just presenting the common modern stereotype seen roaming the nations highschools today). I'm terrible sorry if this sounds harsh.
God I love to vent after work.
.

You're such a stupid dickhead. Instead of constructive criticism you start with mouthing off then going off on a ridiculous tangent about people who want to become Eminem? What does that have to do with anything? Then you warn him not to get a guitar and smoke weed? What the hell are you talking about? This kind of wandering rant is indicative of cocaine use.

Next time why don't you just save literary gems like this when the topic calls for it. Also, you may want to think of changing jobs. You sound like someone who spends much too much time alone, a programmer perhaps? Or a UPS driver? My psychic senses are tingling...

 

[MarcoPollo]

^ Hahahaha Burnn

 

[hungryduck]

I lead an IT department thats composed of monkeys and various marsupials for a living. Eventually I will teach them to write shakespeare.

 

[MarcoPollo]

Wow wat^^^

 

[Greatgat]

Yeah, needs to more than 20 seconds long. More synth, more UPBEAT! I am, after all. a progressive house kid.