my half life 2 deathmatch video

[vipeness]

hey guys, i was wondering if you guys could check out my half life 2 deathmatch video and tell me what you think, if it is good, bad, too long, too short, etc etc, that would be great. any feedback is better than no feedback. I accidently misspelled a word in the beginning
Thank you for allowing me into this community too.

http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-866142949907138121&q=vipeness

Thanks Guy

 

[Vegeta897]

I'd say too long, right off the bat. I didn't feel like watching the rest.

It was well produced, this is a fact. I can't say much about your skill though, aweful lot of misses and attempted kills with one weapon and then switching to another. Honestly if you were playing against more advanced players, you'd be dead pretty quick

Well anyway, there isn't much else to say. The slow motion parts would have been better if you had slowed down the game speed while you were recording the demo to get more frames in there.

 

[$kelet0r]

13 minutes? 4 would have been pushing it...

 

[Sparda]

it was a bit long but it was very well made.