WTF is wrong with this picture.

[Guest]

My tank has turned out so horribly so far. heres the pic its poly count is 1800 so little detail too.
NEED SOME FRIGGIN HELP BADLY

 

[ShinRa]

It isn't bad. It's a work in progress. I think it looks pretty good for someone of your modeling experience.

 

[Korgoth]

yeah it doesn't look bad really, just maybe turn some edges here and there and when you skin it, it will look a helluva lot better

 

[SidewinderX]

you make make LOD models for vehciles, so for the upclose, 5000 tri would be about right, with 2-3 LOD models...

 

[mindless_moder]

tanks arent so round and smooth it seems as tough u havent really looked for ref pics.
always try to find a blueprint of ur subject or if u have a toy model of it in fron of you that s even better
http://www.fullschub.com/3dsmax/blueprints/tanks/tanks-4/m1-abrams.JPG
http://www.fullschub.com/3dsmax/blueprints/tanks/tanks-4/m1-a1.gif
also i take it ur a new modeler and u should try looking at other peoples models just for reference i think thats a good thing to do when ura new starter and u lack ref pics.

 

[FireBall]

Look at the wheels and you will hopefully see what is missing...

 

[Private Snafu]

Your Smoke dischargers look like thier floating off the side of the turret. :-/

 

[Wraith]

it needs treads

 

[Guest]

Its not a M1 A1 Abram that might be one of the problems. its a Type - 90 chinese/Japanese MBT. Sorry if i didnt state that earlier. OBTW can you post tread tutorials if you find any thxs.

 

[Guest]

OK i have new renders. looks better its about 2500 polys now

 

[Stone]

Well, i see you've sorted out the wheels,

So...

1. the barrel of the gun, looks like its got quite a few un-needed sides
2. It's too round for my liking, it should be hard sharp and bulky, like a tank is
3. and prob the airral (SP?) too...

 

[Guest]

what is airral and what is SP so i can awnser the question!

 

[Stone]

(SP?) means Spelling?, as in I'm not sure if this is right, and can't be bothered looking it up, sorry its a habit to type that, that i picked up from NGs..

its the long pole at the back this the nobbly bit at the top... (if that helps)

 

[Guest]

Yeah i need to fix the ANTENNA a little but it was a fast antenna thingy.