feedback

[ritzon]

Hello, ive been bored the past day or so so i decided to make a map in hammer and would like some small feedback. it is my first map so be harsh and tell me some better things i could do. ;p

here is the link.
http://rapidshare.com/files/255578880/ritzonsmap.rar

 

[ritzon]

Oh, and the map is named "new" sry to confuse people if you downloaded it. i named the rar ritzonsmap

 

[Vegeta897]

Pics please.

 

[ritzon]

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a99/imstupid244/new3.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a99/imstupid244/new4.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a99/imstupid244/new2.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a99/imstupid244/new1.jpg

 

[Barnz]

oh boy, this map has some serious brush errors - looks like you know the basics. anyway, you should check tutorial maps provided in sdk (you seem to be on the right track)