Well I havent done an action scene but its a scene after an action scene where the metro cop has been suffering severely from battle horror and is in desperate need of a Psyciatrist...
Please use the official thread for this kind of thing. I don't think we need two threads running on Garry's mod stuff. I appreciate you're attempting to do a contest but probably best not to as a) there's no prizes b) there's no organisation for judging and c) it would work just as well in the official thread.