Random Poetry...

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Ok - although Pitzy would be ashamed of me, I do have a crush on a girl, not as much as the poem would paint - but a fun thing to write in 15 min...

I have thought so much about so little
And I have come to one request
Let me be a Master Thief
To steal one sweet lingering kiss
From those subtle lips;
To heal the blight
Of my dear heart
And to leave
Such a soft and glorious taste.

That is all I need
To calm the storm
The force of my heart
The waves have not stood still
For many a moment.

When my eyes glance yours
The sea stops
And the fluttering of
Thousands of butterflies
Lifts me above the world
And into my dream.

As soon as you speak
The butterflies halt
I fall, soaring no longer
As clouds fly past
And my hair dances
as a waltz in song.

This dream is as fragile
As a whisper
I dare not break it
But know I must
To not tell you is crime
But to loose you
Is something I dare not think.

To see your eyes
My heart lingers
To hear you speak
My ears rejoice
As you laugh
Inside I cry with joy.

You do not complete me
But you fill the gaps
Make the last note to the song
Last piece of the puzzle
You are my
Final

What do you think?
 
As my IPT teacher would say, it's preetttteee goood!
 
I read like 3 as "Let me be a Master Chief", and was like wtf.

So anyway good poem. I don't suggest you ever give it to the girl as, say a valentines card. It leads to trouble (eventually).
 
You sissy. When real men are lovesick they go out and kill a bear or something.
 
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I'm going to stick
My dick into you
 
DAMNIT SLOTHY!!!!

That's an awesome poem. Give it to her ;)
 
I won't give it to her now... Maybe after i've asked her out, which is either tommorw or next wednesday!
 
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