Two Filipino's, a Mexican, and an Apple

[sinkoman]

EDIT: Forget it, the forum keeps ruining the story. Included as an attatchment

Mods, please, see this not as a recounting of a drug related experience, but more as an exercise in creative writing.

Yes, I realize that there's a tonne of grammatical errors all over the place, including the improper usage of the word "disdain". Don't believe i'll fix them, considering that i'm not intending this as anything too finalized.

 

[Raziaar]

You need to reformat it. If you created it in a text editor, disable word wrap, copy it all, and then paste it back into this thread.

 

[sinkoman]

Read OP

 

[Dan]

Do you have a shorter version? Maybe with the important parts bulleted or bolded or something?

 

[Raziaar]

Do you have a shorter version? Maybe with the important parts bulleted or bolded or something?

Don't be so lazy. It's not that long.

 

[sinkoman]

What gives. No matter how hard I try to fix it, the forums keep deleting this one paragraph from the entire story.

Going to try to fix it one last time before I give up and include it as an attatchment.

 

[Cormeh]

So.... they were in a pretty bad relationship and she was screwing another guy?

I hate to be the heartless one, but so what?

 

[sinkoman]

So.... they were in a pretty bad relationship and she was screwing another guy?

I hate to be the heartless one, but so what?

Well, he'd been trying to get back together with her, despite the better advice of his peers. She was polite enough to just ignore all his calls till then. Then, when she DID decide to pick up, instead of just saying "stop calling me, it's over, **** off", she decided to let him see that she's already getting knocked up by some other dude.

Bitchy thing to do if you ask me. I mean, to the logical bystander, it surely is a case of "so what", but to the already emotionally distraught, who's emotions were now amplified by drug usage, he was put in an intensely painful state.